Wednesday, April 27, 2005

1968

A story for no-one:

"The heat inside the tiny apartment was oppressive, as always. Ken was sprawled out on the tiny couch. It had been four days since he had left the room, and there seemed to be no end in sight. He wanted so desperately to get back to his work. Sure, being a lowly lab technician was not a coveted or particularly interesting position, but there were other reasons to go to work. But that was impossible now. He would have to wait out the current trouble. His neigbour had agreed ot bring him supplies as he needed."

"Why was Ken hiding in an oppressive sweat-block? Well, it was 1968 in Guangzhou. Gangs of unruly youths dressed indentically and carrying before them the Oriental equivalent of the Ark of the Covenant were roaming the streets, flollowing directives that shifted and changed like the weather. They were just as predictable. So, it was inevitable that those with foreign features were to be singled out as scapegoats for the stagnating ecenomy, for the natural disaster, for the crimes and the human stupidity and human failure, for oppressive geopolitics and restrictive social mores. Ken's father had been a Japanese national when he had been conceived. He had never had trouble for his difference before (save in the countryside, but he did not veture out there often--he had no reason to)."

"His savings would weather this storm. There was enough food and water. His neighbours were kind people. It was a close-knit community that had survived earlier riots and displacements. Ken had never been antsy; he had taken what he needed to take, whichever burdens life threw in front of him. He had made it through the cutthroat university and the vocational training, the loyalty training, and the doctrinal training. What bothered him now, what made his skin feel lumpy and driven to move was, predictably, her."

Reader participation survey: will Ken a) get up and brew some tea on his makeshift samovar, b) take a nap, since there is nothing better to do, c) get up nad look out the window, or d) memorize some poetry (in Chinese, of course)?

Consider: "why do you insist that the genetic code is "sacred" or "taboo"? It is a chemical process, and nothing more. For that matter, we are chemical processes, and nothing more. If you deprive yourself of a useful tool simply because it reminds you uncomfortably of your mortality, then you have needlessly and pointlessly crippled yourself."

10 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey dude... i really like that last quote. and i'm sort of voting for him to take a nap... it just goes with the oppressive atmosphere. but you know, it could backfire and then he wouldn't be able to sleep all night...plenty of time to think about the girl.

swig

10:09 AM  
Blogger A. D. said...

You've got my leanings down. At this point is usually where I'd throw in a senseless dream sequence or something like that because I'm getting bored of having to follow a plot. But let's see what others may suggest...

4:55 PM  
Blogger linda said...

I have an alternative Ending...
( Yeah I took couple of playwright classes in College)
(Ken looks at the audiance and shakes his head)
KEN
So you seriously bought this??
The whole staying at home. Pretty girl, My Japanse Father??
I am nothing but a character, invented and overderamatized by somebody who has nothing better to do than writting..
Nobody really knows what I would do next.. cause it's so unimportant in 30 years I wont even remember it myself...
" There are only 12 stories in the world, and you are watching the 10th one for 100000,0000th time.."
Please stop watching me, I wanna take a nap.

1:12 AM  
Blogger A. D. said...

I like Linda's idea, but I'm trying to keep it formula-based. I am fond of the whole "break down the fourth wall" speech. (I've always wanted to see one where the character literally does that and cuts themselves on the invisible plastic wall of illusion, and what have you.)

Nobody here's pretending to be original. WE;ll see what develops.

2:22 PM  
Blogger linda said...

I just got back from the bookstore and they've got a whole section on Manga stuff..
Turn it into a Manga Comic Book thing..
And give Ken Superpowers... or the gal..
He would fly to save the girl from whatever....

7:35 PM  
Blogger A. D. said...

Heh. Maybe his superpower can be to dispel The Party's propaganda. This takes him on a journey where he eventually confronts the evil Chairman Mao. and defeats him while saving a busload of schoolchilden while, of course, getting the girl.

Reminds me of this.

I'll continue the story soon.

1:36 AM  
Blogger Y said...

e) sew himself a red armband in order to disillusion himself into that young revolutionary’s heart ..if lucy liu could become the head of the chinese triad even if she was half japanese in Kill Bill, he definetly can pull of the beautiful red glow of the red armband and the sexy patriotic mao suits with integrity as well... Maybe he can spin a few pirouettes at the uplifting melody of Chinese propaganda that he will blast from the gramophone he got for a hundredth of a yen many years ago from dingy pawn shop on 白杨Street before it was re-inaugurated as Mao our Sun Street.


hehe

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